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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 20:56:58

well I really like writting adventures, horrors, and mysteries. I get my ideas from my dreams. If I dream about something cool, I write it down, change it a little bit and make it into a story.

By the way. I still haven't chosen a title for my story....

True Midnight Blue

Edited by - true midnight blue on 05 Aug 2007 20:57:26

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 20:59:23

kwl

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:00:04

i like reading mystereys

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:00:50

i like the idear about the dreams

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:01:07

I need to think of a title.... XD

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:01:55

mmmmmm

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:02:16

wats it genrally about

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:05:43

*pokes part one and two* lol read it. ok, It's about a guy who falls into another world...

But I think I should come up with the name by myself since I know the full story and how it's gonna end and what's gonna happen inbetween the begining and the end... cuz... well I'm writting it. lol.

I'll think of something.

eventually. when i can be bothered to think.

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:08:57

another world

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:09:19

2 worlds

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Posted - 05 Aug 2007 : 21:14:23

I've come up with a title!! FINALLY!!

The story is called

The Land Of Impossible Things

^___^

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Posted - 06 Aug 2007 : 09:49:04

ohh kwl name

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Posted - 06 Aug 2007 : 11:02:18

i like

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Posted - 06 Aug 2007 : 11:07:59

thanks

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Posted - 06 Aug 2007 : 12:18:03

Yea, I like making nice, cool - not plain - names, like in vmk i have a room all about like Narnia, its called Narnia Water Front, but i might change it, any ideas?

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Posted - 06 Aug 2007 : 13:39:41

I like narnia water front.

Oh and have you read part two of my story yet? 0_o
It's on the 3rd page.

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Posted - 07 Aug 2007 : 14:00:37

WHO LIKES MYSTEREYS? IM MADE A BOOK, Story... ABOUT a boy called John... and its called Mystery. Its really good, there is 6 chapters, i will put it on chapter by chapter, to make u think..... ^____________________^ big face!

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Posted - 07 Aug 2007 : 14:10:16

I read the whole story so far ^_^, Okay, Im gonna write out my story, but chapter 1 is the longest, please read it :):(

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Posted - 07 Aug 2007 : 14:12:55

MYSTERY!

Chapter 1

One day John was walking along the road when he saw his friends in the car. The car pulled over and John was invited in. “ Where are we going?” John said. “ To the old abandoned River, Were the old wooden hut is.” Well John didn’t like the sound of that. John was 14. His friends were 14 as well. But they had a friend who was driving and he was 17. “ why are we going down there?” John asked. “Just Shut Up!” said the driver. The rest all laughed. John looked down at the car floor and saw a bag, he then realized that in it was alcohol. John then said, “Uh.. Let me out please!!” The car also smelt of smoke, he knew that these people weren’t his friends at all. They all just laughed and kept on driving. They were getting close to the old wooden hut, he shouted, “LET ME OUT NOW!” Then the last thing he knew was his friends with a needle. They injected him!! When we woke up, he was sitting outside the old wooden hut. He was all funny and still couldn’t see right, he said… “Please let me out of the car…” as he didn’t know were it was, so he just said the car. They all laughed, as john turned around he saw then drinking and smoking. He was going to run, but he couldn’t. His legs felt stiff, and he felt sick. He thought to himself, “these people aren’t my friends, they have just used me!!” The driver came over to him with two bottles of alcohol, and he said.. Drink this! John looked around and pretended not to hear him, then the driver kicked him and said drink this!!! John shouted no, but it didn’t work… he stuffed it into his mouth and he took some, he didn’t feel well at all. When the driver walked away, John through the bottle into the river. The river was right beside the old wooden hut. And trees all around the hut and river, he thought to himself, “I wonder what’s in the wooden hut…” John was near the door of the hut, and he thought he should have a look in it, he tried to move toward it, on his stomach, without having to walk, as his legs were stiff. When the door opened, it creaked. One of his ‘supposed to be friends’ came over to see what the noise was, he said, “John get out of there, you know its only for at night, to sit and drink inside.” John thought of an idea: “I’m sorry, but I really need to use the toilet.” John said. “Just go down to the river, its easier.” His friend said. “What did you do to me?” John then asked.

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Posted - 07 Aug 2007 : 14:16:11

What did he do!?!?!? You will never know MUAHAHA!!! MUAHAHA! sorry just had my evil time! Hehe

Stephen