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ELLIEM
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Status: offline |  Posted - 12 Apr 2007 : 18:09:33  
| One dark night I saw a bright light out of the window it was like a laser flaring at a house but brighter. Then it climbed up the wall and jumped into my ROOM got by my bed and shouted “ BOOOOOOO” I jumped out of my bed ran down stairs through the door and into the street. How do you think I felt? Running down the streets with nothing on but my pants. People came into the street laughing at me so I went inside my house, number 999, went to my room on the floor was a piece of chewing gum and a flashlight. Somebody left the items here and I don’t have a flashlight or some chewing gum so it could not have been me! People think I’m crazy. I have one supporter who is Jessica Potter she is my best friend actually she is my only friend. We play all sorts of eventful things together. We play ice hockey, football, cruel football and badminton but the best thing is having sleepovers. Now it was about 12 o’clock then I saw it .It had an eye, no nose, a squished up face that looked like my aunt Sandy’s squashed face, I’m not joking. Then it ran down the road towards my school I stayed at home I could not make myself move because I was too scared. The next morning I listened to the radio to see if the thing had ruined the school and guess what it had so I had to stay at home and watch telly until my Mum or my Aunt came home. When my Mum was home I told her that the thing I saw had wrecked the school to pieces she was astonished. Now it was 9.30 it is time to go to bed but I did not want to go to bed I wanted to stay up and see if I could find the thing. Then I saw it run down the street so I got out of my bed and ran downstairs and out of the front door now it was running south towards Jessica’s house so I ran down every road it ran down. Finally it stopped at the restraunt called Burger Barn and went inside and took of his face well it was a mask so all I had been doing is chasing someone with a mask on. Next I went home and went to bed and said, “I will never chase that person again.” over and over again. Next morning I told my Mum the thing was just a person.
One HOT day Lisa went for a walk and saw a zoo. She went inside to see what animals were there but all she saw was a man with a broom cleaning. Then Lisa asked, “Were are the animals?” The man answered “There is a Kangaroo and that’s all we’ve got!” Then Lisa said “Lets get more animals by going to different places in the world!” “Ok” the man said. So they went to the airport and flew to Africa and brought a Lion, a Cheetah cub, a Rhino and a baby Elephant. When they got back they made some cages. Then they pushed the animals in. The next day Lots of People began to come to the zoo with cameras and videotapes.
Next they went to North America and got 8 eagles, 4 Dolphins and 20 armadillos. When Lisa got back the made a bird cadge for the eagles, a cage for the armadillos and an aquarium for the dolphins to live in. So the next day 2x as many people came to their zoo.
They thought it was the best amount of Business they had had in weeks. They had 7x as much cash as they did when the started their zoo. They decided to go to Asia. Then they brought back 2 Elephants, 3 Siberian tigers and 4 bears. That brought even more Business the next day. It was storming with people pushing but what made the Crowds go mad was seeing the Dolphins do a performance and seeing the Elephants get fed. Then Lisa said to the man we have made this zoo into a really big success. We have to get some more staff though because if we get more animals we will not be able to cope!!!
^ This wone isnt finished.
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true midnight blue
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Status: offline | Posted - 12 Apr 2007 : 18:23:06
| Pretty good. I haven't read it all yet but I've read most of it.
Here's part of mine:
With trembling fingers he put the key in the dusty brass lock and slowly turned it. He felt so guilty and so imature. This was something that an eight year old would do, not a fourteen year old. He sighed, and decided that he would forget about it for a while. He placed a pale hand on the door and creaked it open. He looked inside. It wasn't nearly as grand as he thought it would be. It was just a dusty room with a desk, bookshelves, an armchair in the corner and a closet. He was really disapointed, ever since he was a really young child he had wondered what was behind that door and he had imagined all sorts of wonderful things. But it was nothing but a very ordinary, and very boring, study. He shook his head and turned away, too depressed to lock the door. He didn't care what the headteacher was going to say. He didn't care if he got detention. He didn't care if Mr. Robberts shoted 'Corbin McDonald! How dare you steal the key from the staff room and go into that room!" or something very similar to that. His dreams where shattered, that was the worst feeling ever. It couldn't get any worse. As he turned to leave he heard a thump. He turned back and looked at the room again. The closet door was open. He stared at it and it slammed shut. At first he thought it was the wind but then he thought... What if it was something else? Without stopping to think, he ran into the room and over to the closet. | | Report this post to a moderator | goto top of page |
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moonlight
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Status: offline | Posted - 12 Apr 2007 : 20:43:50
| .My Football Club
24/2/06
Today was my first time at the Girls footballers club called Siskin Junior School Girl’s Football Club .Only 10 Girls from our club can get into the team so we have to play our best to try and get into the team! I like playing football because it’s fun .Mr. Long worth says to come every week to get into the team and to always try are very best. If I get into the team I’ll be over the moon because we’ve got a tournament in three weeks. If I don’t make the team I don’t really mind because I don’t have to do any work! All I want to do is have fun! I just wish the best for myself, Natasha , Emily , Emma and everyone else .In the club there are some good players and some that need a little more practice and soon everyone might be equal! Alice and Zoë are the best players in the team. I’m about the middle and so are my friends. Georgina and Sherri are the worst players! But all in all everyone deserves a chance to be in the team .Everyone is good at something. Me and my friends will stay friends even if it removes some of us from the football club .I may make the team! I may not make the team but I don’t mind really! My favourite football team is Pompey because I was born there! I was born in st. Mary’s hospital, Portsmouth .I support Pompey.
Yours sincerely
Ciara Joan Booth
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16/3/06
Today was a really good day because we have another tournament coming up in a couple of weeks. I’m really excited about it because both teams the A team and the B team are able to get into the tournament.
24/3/06
Next week on Thursday we have got a football tournament at peel common. We don’t know who we are playing against the only thing we know is we are playing at peel common junior school. Today none of us went to the football club, because Mr. Long worth took the year 4’s to try and beat the world record of the most skips in a group of children and adults.
31/3/06
Yesterday we went to peel common school to play against peel common. First the A team went on and then the B team went on. The A team lost 3-1. But the B team won 1-0 and I was in the B team. Sherri scored the winning goal so that is why today I took Sherri on the top table with me and it was the first time I’ve been on their apart from the time Emma took me on the top table with her quite a while ago ! In April on the 25th or 27th we have a tournament and I might be in it.
1/4/06
Today is the first day of the half term. We have 2 weeks off and a day. My aunty Philippine, Ariel and Heather are in America and aunty Pippa thought heather needed to go back to school the day after they got back! Also Mr. long worth and Mrs. leech left yesterday and two girls were crying because Mr. long worth and Mrs. Leech were leaving we all wished them all the luck they wished for and dreamed for so on Friday we said goodbye to them and they both set off to explore places they’ve never been to so goodbye.
21/4/06
Today was the last day of practice because we have a football tournament next week and we got told if we are in the team. Me, Josie, Alice, Heather, Emma, Linda, Emily and Emma-Louise-Wilson got in team A!
25/4/06
Today we went to grange junior school and went against 3 teams!
28/4/06
Today we were told in may the 25th we have a friendly match against grange.I may be in the A team I may be in the be team it all depends on the training and how good you are just being able to kick the ball or even tackle someone in another team!
25/5/06
Today was the friendly match against grange.
16/6/06
Today we had a mini match Emma scored 3, Natasha and Demi scored 1 each. Emily and Zoë scored 2 each and I scored the equalizer. On the 2nd of July we have a world cup involving 10 girls and 10 boys and we are going to be picked out of a hat and are going to represent that country. On the 4th we have got a friendly against grange.
Thank you for your time and anticipation
Yours sincerely
Ciara Joan Booth
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Status: offline | Posted - 13 Apr 2007 : 11:29:27
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Midnight tell the rest i wanna hear what it was!!!
I haven't finnished my story yet and it's pretty long. When it's done I'll E-mail it to you. | | Report this post to a moderator | goto top of page |
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Status: offline | Posted - 13 Apr 2007 : 13:49:43
| MY STORY
One day,in January, I felt dizzy so I went to sit down and it did not help, so I asked my mom why I felt this way..She said "Well mon Cherie (my love), I don't know why...I'm not a doctor you know".That didn't help mom I said...So she said the next day if I felt worse she would take me to the hospital..The next as I said before I felt really sick so my mom took me to the Children's Hospital ( I am under 18 ) and one nurse came in and asked "what seems to be the problem tonight?" And I said I felt really sick so she said let me feel your tummy....(I'm small for my age so she thought I was about 6 when I am 9) and she said she never felt anything but my mom suggested they take me for Ultrasound so the nurse did and found something....She told us to wait in the E.R.. At that point my mom was crying....I didn't know what was going on so I felt really scared and asked my mom what was happening....She said "Well, I don't want to scare you but since we have to wait in here, I think its bad"...I got soo scared and cried...Then I panicked when I saw the nurse coming with photos.....She asked to speak with my mom in the hallway alone for a minute...Then 2 minutes later I saw my mom burst into tears and ran to the bathroom....Everyone looked at her..I felt embarresed and scared....So, the doctor came and explained to me what it was very softly so I would be calm...It didn't work! I found out that i had a type of Cancer! Then I burst into tears and the doctor gave me a popsicle to cheer me up! LOL...Well,my mom came out and hugged me and she immediatly phoned my family..They were crying really loud I could hear them through the phone....I thought to myself "what if i die...OMG" the I asked the doctor if I would die..He said ERRRR ummmm...I dont know :(((((...I felt terrible...I have to let my family to be this sad..My mom soon talked to the doctor and said I will have to have surgery...My mom nodded and tried not to let her tears go...I understood and said I will do anything to be alive and be with my family..The nurse started to cry a little and they nodded...We will try...I said ok thanks! he said..no prob...thats our job...I was there till 5:21 am and arrived there at 6:00..I stayed late cause they wanted to take tests.The COOL thing is that the nurse had a pug ( my favourite type of dog ) and that she will invite me to her house the day before my surgery! I don't know when I will have my surgery and I don't know what type of cancer I have because doctors and my mom don't want me knowing....I am alive now and I hope I survive this...:(...Well...thats my story.Thank you soo much for reading...As soon as I find out what type of Cancer I have..I will post it here...
Well,I found out I had some type of Cancer in my lungs and that is all the doctors will tell me...My first surgery is in March 18th and it is Febuary 17th so my surgery will be in a month and 1 day....I`m scared...:,(
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